Oh Max...this is beautiful!
The viewpoint you chose Max is marvelous. I hope you keep writing poems.
This poem is so packed with emotion! You've really packed a punch with the format and lack of capitals and punctuation! NICE!
Wow! I found myself in tears while reading your words. I especially was moved by the ending of your poem. You are so right. There will always be a part that still stands. Thank you for giving me a way to connect to so many emotions today. I hope you keep sharing your writing with the world.
Our individual student blogs are "private". This will be a place to share any student's blog that they want to share with the world.